le baiser – Kissing (Haiku -Carpe Diem 484 )

CARPE DIEM HAIKU KAI, Photography, tanka 1 Minute
Caroline Michaud Photographe
Caroline Michaud Photographe

(haiku)


Elle regard coquinement
cils invitant leur baiser,
leurs lèvres touchent à peine.

Looks up demurely
lashes inviting their first kiss,
lips barely touching

 

© Cheryl-Lynn 2014/06/04

Submitted for: Carpe Diem – Haiku #484 – Kissing

 

I would have liked to add 2 lines as a Tanka to the English version:

(tanka)

Looks up demurely
 lashes inviting their first kiss,
lips barely touching
she leans into him – wanting
surrenders to a slow kiss.

 

 

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A little bit about moi: I am a mom, a nana, a sister, a woman, a friend, a human being…a youth counsellor, Family Life Educator. I have been working in the helping profession for over 25 years and volunteered in various capacities from youths to seniors. Tournesol is my nom de plume for haiku and other Japanese form poetry here at Tournesoldansunjardin https://cheryllynnroberts.wordpress.com I hope you enjoy reading through my daily waka. I also have another blog "Stop the Stigma" where I may stand on my soapbox now and then and hope it will become a place to drop in and share or comment on issues important to you. In that vein this could be a great way to learn from each other. http://stigmahursteveryone.wordpress.com

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9 thoughts on “le baiser – Kissing (Haiku -Carpe Diem 484 )”

    1. Thank you! I worked with this photographer’s husband at our youth centre and she is also a counsellor, mother and excellent photographer…her website is referenced.

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      2. Oh, ooops, I didn’t take that shot but where I was standing it was exactly that view I saw…I love it as well…well, I love falls period:) and rapids…so cathartic.

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