fallen leaf (haiga)

© Clr '14
© Clr ’14

lonely leaf floats
 searching in my reflection
a ripple

© Tourneslo ’14

Carpe Diem Sparkling Stars

17 responses to “fallen leaf (haiga)”

  1. greenspeckblogger Avatar
    greenspeckblogger

    Wow … such a brilliant image painted here 🙂

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    1. Cheryl-Lynn Roberts Avatar
      Cheryl-Lynn Roberts

      Thank you so much for your kind words…it had simmered for a while…glad you enjoyed it.

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  2. Bastet Avatar
    Bastet

    trees of other autumns
    lights of other days …

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    1. Cheryl-Lynn Roberts Avatar
      Cheryl-Lynn Roberts

      current flows
      moving forward
      life’s meaning

      winter’s frost slows the pace
      Santa brought me brand new skates

      It’s as if you read a part of my mood when I wrote this and caught the positive…ripple. Love your completion, cara!

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      1. Bastet Avatar
        Bastet

        LOL …

        in his bag Santa had for me
        a doll and candy with red strips
        we played for hours and now for us
        we’ve memories to warm cold fall nights.

        Glad you enjoyed the completion …

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      2. Cheryl-Lynn Roberts Avatar
        Cheryl-Lynn Roberts

        I did, I enjoy doing this and I find when a ku stirs a few lines to complete, I rather add that in the comments:) Hope you are well….it is getting nippy here but they forecast rain a few days so warmer damp weather until snow Saturday…they think…they say…they don friggin know! but 20 miles north of here snow has started.

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      3. Bastet Avatar
        Bastet

        Ah … it reached 21C yesterday then dropped to 8C when the sun went down … seems this is to be a rainy week .. but as you say they don’t know! Sorry the snow has already begun near your place … maybe it will hold off for you until Saturday at least!

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  3. Chèvrefeuille Avatar
    Chèvrefeuille

    Wow! Cheryl this is wonderful … love to use it in one of our upcoming Tan Renga Challenges.

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    1. Cheryl-Lynn Roberts Avatar
      Cheryl-Lynn Roberts

      Thank you, Kristjaan, I would be so honoured! 🙂

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  4. Dolores Fegan Avatar
    Dolores Fegan

    beautiful!

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    1. Cheryl-Lynn Roberts Avatar
      Cheryl-Lynn Roberts

      thanks so much, Dolores.

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  5. Winter-Deluge Avatar
    Winter-Deluge

    So very lovely.

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    1. Cheryl-Lynn Roberts Avatar
      Cheryl-Lynn Roberts

      Thank you so much:)

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  6. J Avatar
    J

    What an interesting reversal — elegant and lovely Tournesol 🙂

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    1. Cheryl-Lynn Roberts Avatar
      Cheryl-Lynn Roberts

      Thanks Jen…glad you liked it:)

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  7. moondustwriter Avatar
    moondustwriter

    speaking with the perfect fall voice.

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    1. Cheryl-Lynn Roberts Avatar
      Cheryl-Lynn Roberts

      Thank you…autumn seems to give us moments to pause…

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