shooting stars/étoiles filantes

shooting stars
escape while trodden skies
swallow me
°°°
étoiles filantes
fuient tandis un ciel éteint
m’avale

© Tournesol ’14

2 thoughts on “shooting stars/étoiles filantes

    1. Why thank you, Blu. If you want to read the complete haibun (narrative with this haiku) go have a look on my other blog. Thought it might be too grim for here.

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