promised under the stars (haiga)

CARPE DIEM HAIKU KAI, haiga, Tournesol dans un jardin 1 Minute
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Blades cutting,
lovers embraced skate
under the stars

lovers embraced skate
searching for the full moon
behind the clouds

under the stars
lovers make promises
beneath the Milky Way

© Tournesol ’14

Carpe Diem

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A little bit about moi: I am a mom, a nana, a sister, a woman, a friend, a human being…a youth counsellor, Family Life Educator. I have been working in the helping profession for over 25 years and volunteered in various capacities from youths to seniors. Tournesol is my nom de plume for haiku and other Japanese form poetry here at Tournesoldansunjardin https://cheryllynnroberts.wordpress.com I hope you enjoy reading through my daily waka. I also have another blog "Stop the Stigma" where I may stand on my soapbox now and then and hope it will become a place to drop in and share or comment on issues important to you. In that vein this could be a great way to learn from each other. http://stigmahursteveryone.wordpress.com

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13 thoughts on “promised under the stars (haiga)”

  2. Cheryl-Lynn, I love your star loving skating lovers looking for the moon. I can en-vision them skating right now. Very romantic, huh?

    I did find this morning an MSN news report of a “new” galaxy that was found near the Milky Way.
    The link is in my ‘Note 3’ under my Carpe Diem poem and pictures.
    http://jimmiehov6.blogspot.com/
    ..

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    1. I am off to check this out, thank you so much. I’m pleased you enjoyed this poem. I was thinking of the river behind my grandmother’s house and the couple was my uncle and his gf…many moons ago, skating on the river.

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    1. It is…back in the day when we had long cold winters and no thaw in between, it was safe and fun…so much freedom skating on a river rather a boarded up rink.

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      2. Ah lucky!! it is way too warm here now…not a spot of snow anywhere:( hopefully it will pick up…especially around the lakes to go ice fishing.

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