dancing interlude (haiku)

bitter cold winds
pirouetting midst the old oak,
scarf on a branch
~
winter promenade
dances on mirrored street,
the old man falls

**or**
winter promenade
hobbling across mirrored street
tap dancing
**or**
winter promenade
leaping across mirrored street
break dance

© Tournesol ’15

CP Timeglass “dance”

21 thoughts on “dancing interlude (haiku)

      1. I guess we all have that protective instinct — we laugh, but we also fear for the old guy. Though when *I* fall I know it’s pretty darn hysterical — arms flapping and weird sounds coming out of my mouth. o.O

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      2. Well I was aiming at a comical image not a tragedy…I thinhk I will change it to stumjbling..btw I read through all the edits of you carnival photo…wow wow wow!! I like it when you go into depths explaining how you to form A to B. Thanks for sharing, kiddo xx

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      3. It’s so good to know that the explanations are appreciated. I look at some of the others’ entries and think, “what does THAT mean?” and “how’d they do THAT” — because I know so little about the programs they use and the processes.

        It’s also good – so I remember what works and what doesn’t! 😉

        Sorry about the stumbling/fall — didn’t mean to create more work for you — !

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