First Kiss (Haibun)

 

MrEyeCandy66 Deviantart: First Kiss

 

It was late at night between Christmas and New Year’s, January, 1968. A time where mini skirts,fish-net stockings and short pea coats were the fashion…never warm enough for those winters in Quebec. A tuque or beret was fashionable but never worn covering the ears…that would not be stylish. The walk from the rec centre was several kilometers to her home by the river.  How he fell in love with her baby blues…

(Troiku)

Beneath wintry skies
pulls her close to him
gasping

~
beneath wintry skies
shivering in their Sunday best
holding hands

pulls her close to him
hearts beating
deafening

gasping
lips moistened like morning dew
their first kiss

© Tournesol ’15

CP TimeGlass “First Kiss”

5 responses to “First Kiss (Haibun)”

  1. georgeplace2013 Avatar
    georgeplace2013

    That’s lovely… I didn’t know about a troika – very nice

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    1. Cheryl-Lynn Avatar
      Cheryl-Lynn

      I am enjoying this form that Chèvrefeuille created…click on the link I highlighted on Troiku and he explains the history of that word and how to write a Troiku.

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  2. Karuna Avatar
    Karuna

    Wow! That is quite a poem. I like the style too. And the song was a trip down memory lane.

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    1. Cheryl-Lynn Avatar
      Cheryl-Lynn

      I made sure to use a song that was on the hit parade in 1968:)

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      1. Karuna Avatar
        Karuna

        Those were the days!

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