compassion rules (tanka)

The Tear at Deviantart.com © Paul Shanghai

crazed gnats buzz
seek prey by the riverside
stunned
they all turn away
saw a tear roll down her cheek

tiny but strong
even gnats have compassion
despite small bellies
tear filled face
message of true chagrin

© Tournesol ’15

Haiku Horizons prompt “tear”

6 responses to “compassion rules (tanka)”

  1. DELL CLOVER Avatar
    DELL CLOVER

    Feeling the pain.

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    1. Tournesol (Clr) Avatar
      Tournesol (Clr)

      The pain makes one weak, the compassion gives hope and allows one to smile and sigh:)

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      1. DELL CLOVER Avatar
        DELL CLOVER

        Yes indeed.

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  2. Alice Keys Avatar
    Alice Keys

    Lovely combination of poetry and picture.

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    1. Tournesol (Clr) Avatar
      Tournesol (Clr)

      Thanks so much, Alice!

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      1. Alice Keys Avatar
        Alice Keys

        🙂

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