lumière de la pleine lune (haiku)

Tournesol Haiku, poèsie français 2015-09-062015-09-11 1 Minute

We asked to write a haiku inspried by our host’s haiku as well as the theme autumn.

light of the full moon
shines through colored leaves
at last … autumn

la lumière de la pleine lune
brille à travers les feuilles colorées
enfin … l’automne
© Chèvrefeuille (traduit)

Summer vacation puts close friends and lovers at a distance sometimes; some have summer jobs far from their loved ones or distant summer homes. Autumn can be a blessing for many…

claire de la lune
flamme de son cœur fébrile
enfin…l’automne

enfin…l’automne
retrouvailles d’amoureux
retour au collège

retour au collège
lueur de la pleine lune
brille sur son visage

brille sur son visage
joues rougissantes la trahissent
yeux pétillants sollicitent

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A little bit about moi: I am a mom, a nana, a sister, a woman, a friend, a human being…a youth counsellor, Family Life Educator. I have been working in the helping profession for over 25 years and volunteered in various capacities from youths to seniors. Tournesol is my nom de plume for haiku and other Japanese form poetry here at Tournesoldansunjardin https://cheryllynnroberts.wordpress.com I hope you enjoy reading through my daily waka. I also have another blog "Stop the Stigma" where I may stand on my soapbox now and then and hope it will become a place to drop in and share or comment on issues important to you. In that vein this could be a great way to learn from each other. http://stigmahursteveryone.wordpress.com View all posts by Tournesol

Published 2015-09-062015-09-11

15 thoughts on “lumière de la pleine lune (haiku)”

Forest Tinker says:

2015-09-06 at 03:23

Ah, superbe! Particulièrement en français

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1. Cheryl-Lynn says:
  
  2015-09-06 at 04:59
  
  C’est vraie, des fois les mots coulent mieux en français. Merci, Hamish!
  
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joanna says:

2015-09-06 at 10:54

yeux qui coulent? :-
Brings tears to your eyes, this one.
Enjoyed the short story with a sting in its tail
He must be a Scorpio.

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1. Cheryl-Lynn says:
  
  2015-09-06 at 17:30
  
  Who knows and she a Pisces 😉
  
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Chèvrefeuille says:

2015-09-06 at 21:32

Merci … quelle beauté … What a beautiful French translation … thank you.

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Cheryl-Lynn says:

2015-09-06 at 21:37

You’re welcome:)

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Bastet says:

2015-09-07 at 13:14

nicely done … a great troiku and you did a fab job translating Chèvrefeuille’s haiku!

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1. Cheryl-Lynn says:
  
  2015-09-07 at 18:22
  
  It’s translating the haiku that got me started to continue in French:)
  
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  1. Bastet says:
    
    2015-09-08 at 05:36
    
    A sort of double inspiration … very interesting.
    
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  2. Cheryl-Lynn says:
    
    2015-09-08 at 05:56
    
    Yep, I started writing a renga, then tried a troiku using his haiku but then my muse took me somewhere else in français
    
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  3. Bastet says:
    
    2015-09-08 at 05:59
    
    🙂 and it’s always wise to follow ones muse … this is the proof of the pudding!
    
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  4. Cheryl-Lynn says:
    
    2015-09-08 at 06:01
    
    Yes, I find my muse is sometimes connected with the divine (I know that sounds a bit weird for me but I read over some poems and have no clue when I thought of those words).
    
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  5. Bastet says:
    
    2015-09-09 at 15:04
    
    I think I understand, i probably wouldn’t have said divine but the ideas certainly pop up and one doesn’t know where they come from!
    
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  6. Cheryl-Lynn says:
    
    2015-09-09 at 19:22
    
    Since my mom passed I like some of my work and how she loved my poetry and prose in the past.
    
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  7. Bastet says:
    
    2015-09-10 at 07:14
    
    Understandable … completely.
    
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