turning in circles (troiku)

melancholy stage –
casting ghosts and goblins
before the snow

melancholy stage
between lovers
lost in darkness

casting ghosts and goblins
self-pity and delusions
run amok

before the snow –
in all the wrong places
searching for answers

© Tournesol ’15

Haiku Horizons – “before”

Troiku is a new haiku form created by Chèvrefeuille, a Dutch haiku poet,  you can see instructions at his blog, Carpe Diem Haiku Kai where he posts haiku memes every day.

24 responses to “turning in circles (troiku)”

  1. Alice Keys Avatar
    Alice Keys

    Wow. This is a rich weave of images.

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    1. Cheryl-Lynn Avatar
      Cheryl-Lynn

      Thanks…it took off as one haiku and then my muse took over.

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      1. Alice Keys Avatar
        Alice Keys

        I could tell it was inspired. Thanks for sharing. 🙂

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  2. J Cosmo Newbery Avatar
    J Cosmo Newbery

    Nice progression

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    1. Cheryl-Lynn Avatar
      Cheryl-Lynn

      Thank you 🙂

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  3. readinpleasure Avatar
    readinpleasure

    Profoundly written. 🙂

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    1. Cheryl-Lynn Avatar
      Cheryl-Lynn

      thank you, Celestine.

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  4. Archana Kapoor Avatar
    Archana Kapoor

    Loved it Cheryl… sharing it on twitter 🙂

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    1. Cheryl-Lynn Avatar
      Cheryl-Lynn

      Namaste, thank you Archana x

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  5. Kathy Combs (@KathyCombs16) Avatar
    Kathy Combs (@KathyCombs16)

    Thank you for introducing me to a new form of haiku…now I am intrigued!

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    1. Cheryl-Lynn Avatar
      Cheryl-Lynn

      Check out on Carpe Diem Haiku Kai, it is nicely explained.

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  6. janicead Avatar
    janicead

    Great job! You are becoming the troiku queen!

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    1. Cheryl-Lynn Avatar
      Cheryl-Lynn

      Thanks so much,Janice. I really enjoy this form.

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  7. Bastet Avatar
    Bastet

    Beautifully executed troiku … and a wonder life lesson too!

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    1. Cheryl-Lynn Avatar
      Cheryl-Lynn

      Thanks, cara, it is amazing where these troiku can take you sometimes.

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      1. Bastet Avatar
        Bastet

        Sure is … they are really a fantastic form, and you’ve mastered them very well indeed!

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      2. Cheryl-Lynn Avatar
        Cheryl-Lynn

        I never know when I write a haiku if I will continue into a troiku and I think that’s the beauty of writing it.

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      3. Bastet Avatar
        Bastet

        I know what you mean … the same happens for me with tanka or choka.

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      4. Cheryl-Lynn Avatar
        Cheryl-Lynn

        You are the Queen of choka, cara!!!

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      5. Bastet Avatar
        Bastet

        🙂 thanks!

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  8. Kalpana solsi Avatar
    Kalpana solsi

    Keep your muse happy.

    I would love to try may hand at Troiku.

    http://ideasolsi65.blogspot.in/2015/09/before.html?m=1

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    1. Cheryl-Lynn Avatar
      Cheryl-Lynn

      It’s a form I am loving more and more. Check it out at the creator of this form: http://chevrefeuillescarpediem.blogspot.ca/p/troiku-new-form-of-haiku.html

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  9. milan rajkumar Avatar
    milan rajkumar

    Gems ! ! !

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    1. Cheryl-Lynn Avatar
      Cheryl-Lynn

      thanks so much, Milan! 🙂

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