© dverse Poets Pub,View of the church of Saint Paul de Mausole 1889 – private collection of Elizabeth Taylor

The sun is smiling today.  There is still an extra hour of bright colours before I am forced to retire to the  gloom of old church dorms.   I must hurry  and not waste time in the narrows of my mind!   It is time to capture what my heart might see some day…again.   Oh to have lived among the life of such hints, once sparked my life.

The sky is bursting with bright aqua and the sun is so bright it  dominates the clouds.  Billows smile in her golden glow. Oh how I would love to be there some day and run through the fields with my lover.  Hand in hand skipping like youngsters again. Oh, to be young again and soulfully alive.

It is a good harvest,  I overheard a farmer say to the cook last week. And yes, I can see the wealth of wheat so much prettier in the fields;  blow, blow wind!  Run while you still can until we meet again in the grey pit of my breakfast bowl  where only milk and brown sugar will turn you into a shade of mud.

feel nature’s pulse
golden wheat waltz
lilt of the wind

© Tournesol ’15

Dverse Poets – Monday Haibun

November Haibun #3

THE WALTZING WIND – Michiel Merkies – Piano Solos volume 1

45 responses to “dancing in the wind (haibun)”

  1. Victoria Avatar

    I just love this, especially the haiku. Beautiful use of 1st person and how you weave in colors.

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    1. Cheryl-Lynn Avatar

      Thank you, it was such a beautiful painting and it has a lot of history.

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  2. Candy Avatar

    what a little slice of a life you’ve created – super!

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    1. Cheryl-Lynn Avatar

      Thanks so much, Candy, glad you enjoyed it!

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  3. The Muscleheaded Blog Avatar

    A lovely read, Cheryl-Lynn !!!!

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    1. Cheryl-Lynn Avatar

      Thanks, Chris, it is a beautiful painting!

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  4. kaykuala h Avatar

    Beautiful narration of goodness of wheat-fields to the eye as well as to the empty stomach at breakfast. Wonderful write Cheryl!

    Hank

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    1. Cheryl-Lynn Avatar

      Thanks so much, Hank. There is whimsical and practical. It`s how I feel looking at cornfields, I do love corn!

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  5. Björn Rudberg (brudberg) Avatar

    I like how you pull it back to the cereal in your bowl.. if just a little of that could have a little of that wonderful wheat walz

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    1. Cheryl-Lynn Avatar

      Thanks, Bjorn, I know it is a drastic change in the “beauty” as oatmeal or porridge are ugly but tasty;) thought it might be a bit funny too.

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  6. Misky Avatar

    Completely charming.

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    1. Cheryl-Lynn Avatar

      Thank you, Misky.

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  7. http://vivinfrance.wordpress.com Avatar

    A gorgeous sunny excursion into the painting.

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    1. Cheryl-Lynn Avatar

      Thanks, one does feel the sun and wind in this painting.

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  8. katiemiafrederick Avatar

    So nice to see your words dance
    again.. my friend.. truly the darkness
    and pain i have lived in life
    tales me without a doubt
    that miracles are
    real and in this
    life with believe
    just believe in
    you anything
    is possible
    and can come
    true.. if only
    arms waving
    as wheat of
    dance in golden
    fields and blue skies
    of alive again always now
    smiling and laughing as
    human being shall
    connecting
    again..
    with
    light
    of
    Love..

    Dance Light
    moves Love
    grains of us..:)

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    1. Cheryl-Lynn Avatar

      What a lovely poem you have added here, thank you. This painting does uplift the soul

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      1. katiemiafrederick Avatar

        Smiles.. Yes.. It does..:)!

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  9. writersdream9 Avatar

    Your prose is so inviting and the Haiku seals it!

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    1. Cheryl-Lynn Avatar

      Oh, I love that “seals it” ! a compliment for the haiku should add something different a little special too. Your comments are always so encouraging in my writing, thank you, again:)

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      1. writersdream9 Avatar

        My pleasure!

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  10. MarinaSofia Avatar

    Oooh, I didn’t know it was in the private collection of Elizabeth Taylor – or had been – I assume you mean the actress?
    A rich, ripe, bountiful harvest is heralded here in this poem which tickles my taste buds and addresses all my senses, in fact.

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    1. Cheryl-Lynn Avatar

      Yes, I researched a bit what this church represented when Van Gogh painted this. Van Gogh actually voluntarily committed himself to this (church turned into an asylum) …so much history, I may search to read more on his life.

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  11. janicead Avatar

    Gorgeous post! Because it paints a place with words.

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    1. Cheryl-Lynn Avatar

      Thanks Janice, I`ll leave the skilled artist use their brush and I`ll do my best with my pen:)

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  12. Kathy Reed Avatar

    If I were to re-write the poem I wrote for this prompt, it would sound something like this…a narrative of a third person who lives nearby..poor probably, who works, dreams, and lives and breaths the the sky and fields first hand. Beautiful.

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    1. Cheryl-Lynn Avatar

      What a lovely interpretation…poor, sick, young or old, with that view, only beauty is seen 🙂

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  13. petrujviljoen Avatar

    ”lilt of the wind” – well said!

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    1. Cheryl-Lynn Avatar

      Thank you, I like that word too, seems to go well with a waltz:)

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  14. helenmidgley Avatar

    Great job, particularly that last sentence 🙂

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    1. Cheryl-Lynn Avatar

      That last sentence was fun…real can be fun sometimes. Thanks, Helen.

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  15. Grace Avatar

    Love the bright colors and positive energy radiating from your haibun ~ Also love that lilt of the wind ~

    Thanks for linking up with Haibun Monday ~

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    1. Cheryl-Lynn Avatar

      I am so happy Dverse has this prompt…love haibun writing.

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  16. lynn__ Avatar

    I enjoyed your delightful monologue…and the piano music!

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    1. Cheryl-Lynn Avatar

      Thanks so much, Lynn, searched for music that sounds like wheat dancing 😉

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      1. lynn__ Avatar

        Yes! I thrill to see soybean fields wave and dance here in the summer.

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  17. Bodhirose Avatar

    I like how you took us from the wind swept fields and sun-filled skies to your breakfast bowl. Yes, the whimsy was sweet!

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    1. Cheryl-Lynn Avatar

      thanks so much for you lovely comment…I do enjoy hot oatmeal with brown sugar especially in the winter:)

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  18. mishunderstood Avatar

    I especially like “Billows smile in her golden glow”…..and your haiku was exquisite.

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    1. Cheryl-Lynn Avatar

      Thank you so much, I love it when readers enjoy reading as much as I enjoy writing.

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  19. Bastet Avatar

    Love this .. you’ve sure set yourself an interesting goal, a haibun a day is no easy matter! Brava!

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    1. Cheryl-Lynn Avatar

      Thanks cara…oh right, I am due for one today!

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  20. Snakypoet (Rosemary Nissen-Wade) Avatar
    Snakypoet (Rosemary Nissen-Wade)

    Brilliant; I love it.

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    1. Cheryl-Lynn Avatar

      Thank you!

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  21. patriciaruthsusan Avatar

    Lovely pieces to accompany a beautiful painting. Thanks also for the lovely music. —– Suzanne Joshi

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    1. Cheryl-Lynn Avatar

      Thanks so much, Suzanne, for your kind words.

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