Moonlight gaze filtered
lovers stare up at the stars
steam of hot springs
moonlight gaze filtered
love swimming in their gaze
starry eyes
lovers stare up at the stars
huddled closer feel
their heartbeat
steam of hot springs
heat running through their veins
midnight lust
© Tournesol’15/11/08
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Here is a beautiful poem I would like to share from another poet/blogger who writes a beautiful tribute to his wife. This poem totally mesmerized me more than passion can sustain, but the words of a long, lasting true love here at Rameshood.blogspot.com
जब साँझ ढले Gangs of Mango Trees..
Shared with Haiku My Heart/..Gangs of Mango Trees
She balances his
steaming food box on her head;
hot sun-filled fields
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Hot sun-filled fields;
steamy gossips and happier
gangs of mango trees
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Gangs of mango trees;
night is still with no more steam
in the chilled air..
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Dear Blogger friend, You will honour me by reading the below mentioned too,,,,
In celebration of Deewali, the festival of lights, Here’s a Hindi Poem, first time on this Blog..dedicated to my wife.. who has supported me through thick and thin..
For my non-Hindi Speaking friends let me share the essence..
In the poem here, I talk about the need for a husband and wife to walk together hand in hand in the evening of life..confidently without fear having full trust in God.. I pray to them to spend time enjoying the gifts of nature, resting under the trees, listening to songs of birds, talking to stars.. living a full life.. The poem is my way of saying thanks to my dear wife.. We have had a lovely time together. She has supported me all the way through thick ‘n’ thin for all the 33 years.. This is my way to say thanks to her.. READ ON but before that…
A VERY HAPPY DEEWALI , THE FESTIVAL OF LIGHTS, TO YOU ALL… STAY BLESSED…
जब साँझ ढले…
जब साँझ ढले
तब साथ चलें…
हाथों में हाथ
बातों का साथ
हो कठिन डगर
यूँ ही चलें मगर
न रुके कभी
न थमें कभी
जब दम लगे
सांस काम लगे
सयम न हारें
कुछ पल गुजारें
इक पेड़ तले
इक पेड़ तले
जब साँझ ढले
तब साथ चलें….
पाँव में छाले
मरहम लगा लें
कभी डगमगाएं
कभी लडख़ड़ायें
चाहे तूफ़ान
करे परेशान
हिम्मत न टूटे
साथ न छूटे
अपना खुदा
न हो जुदा
हर बला टले
हर बला टले
जब साँझ ढले
तब साथ चलें
धूप जलाये
पर रोक न पाय
ठडीं हवा
दे हौसला
पेड़ भी सारे
हमें निहारें
पक्षी गायें
दिल को भाएं
सुनेगी रातें
सितारों से बातें
चाहे चाँद जले
चाहे चाँद जले
जब साँझ ढले
तब साथ चलें …..
RS:)
wow two beautiful poems in English about steam and a lovely poem in Hindi too. Makes me wish I read a language other than English.
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Mine is the first poem ONLY. The other poem with his translation is not mine…I wanted to share Ramesh’s beautiful tribute to his wife…you can click on the link to visit his blog.
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You’re poem is quite lovely especially the play of steam and moonlight. Thanks for clearing up the confusion. I thought the second poem about the Mango Tree was yours too. It’s a similar style but not your voice.
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I have much to learn reading his beautiful poetry:) Thanks for your kind words.
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Wow an erotic cascade , Cheryl ! How romantic !
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Thank you, Milan. I kept seeing rolling fog off the bay in Newfoundland but could not quite get an erotic haiku out of that . I am going to work on that one:)
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Yours was lovely and thank you for sharing!
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Delightful troiku! Thank you also for sharing the tribute 🙂
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Thank you, your comments are welcome at Rameshood,BlogSpot.com
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