nature’s wonderous mysteries (haibun –sort of)

© Clr'15
© Clr’15

Walking home last night she sees grey swirls elevated near the curb as she crosses the street. The first frozen puddle she has noticed in the city, autumn’s last month flirting with winter.  She knows the days are numbered now. Leading towards the end of this season sometimes feels like walking towards a grave.

fallen to their death
leaves spread season’s quilt
tucking in the earth

Although logic knows the earth is not dead but asleep…napping for a spell, until spring, the dark of day lacking sunshine makes us feel this way on this cold day of November.  Not only does nature seem somnolent but the sun as well, turning in so early.

sun bids farewell
yet, it’s only teatime!
autumn’s new soirée

No longer can one dine in the evening whilst they admire art displays in the sky. (sigh!) The artist too, has turned in earlier, skipping dinner and off to bed.

painting moods in blues
in the darkest hour
cleansing of new dawn

One can sometimes hear
In the darkest hour
awe celestial notes
message from the heavens,
still, she is not clear…

Nature has its mysteries, that she does not know; makes it all the more appealing,  savouring the unknown.

whispers in her ear
playing sanguine notes
lighting up her soul

© Tournesol ’15

I think I may have gotten carried away here with poetic prose and turned a few sentences into haiku and tanka.  I am still categorizing this as a haibun.

 

19 responses to “nature’s wonderous mysteries (haibun –sort of)”

  1. Melinda Kucsera Avatar
    Melinda Kucsera

    beautiful post, poems, imagery and video! A real treat to dispatch midweek blues.

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    1. Cheryl-Lynn Avatar
      Cheryl-Lynn

      Thanks!! I thought today was Thursday, so the week will be long and I didn’t even work Sunday…but two more days to go and it is sunny again today and a bit warmer.

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  2. humbird Avatar
    humbird

    I really resonate with your observation of the season. At the beginning, such a drama, the ‘death’, logically brings us to pondering about content of shorter day….beautiful haiku, haibun and music – what a quality time you gave to the prompt! Enjoyed very much!

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    1. Cheryl-Lynn Avatar
      Cheryl-Lynn

      Thanks so much for your kind words. It was fun writing it so soon after that moment.

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  3. janicead Avatar
    janicead

    So many beautiful verses in your haibun.

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    1. Cheryl-Lynn Avatar
      Cheryl-Lynn

      I truly enjoyed writing this one…it was like a painting…kept adding more colours and nuances. The tanka was actually a sentence I thought fit too nicely to stand in one line:)

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  4. lynn__ Avatar
    lynn__

    Love the bluesy mood and flow of this, Cheryl…even if it doesn’t fit a form exactly 🙂

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    1. Cheryl-Lynn Avatar
      Cheryl-Lynn

      Thanks so much, Lynn, I`m glad you enjoyed it. 🙂

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  5. writersdream9 Avatar
    writersdream9

    What a journey you took us on! Fantastic!

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    1. Cheryl-Lynn Avatar
      Cheryl-Lynn

      Thank you, Carol, for your lovely comment! 🙂

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      1. writersdream9 Avatar
        writersdream9

        You’re welcome!

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  6. adaspoetryalcove Avatar
    adaspoetryalcove

    Wow! what a beautiful post. Lots of great poetry!

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    1. Cheryl-Lynn Avatar
      Cheryl-Lynn

      Thanks so much!! I really enjoyed writing this.

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  7. Ye Pirate Avatar
    Ye Pirate

    You intermingled literature, nature, music and philosophy – it worked so well, being dipped in. There was that late autumn melancholu, but using the different genres really pulls the reader in. I think you are right to explores different ways.

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    1. Cheryl-Lynn Avatar
      Cheryl-Lynn

      I am pleased you enjoyed this, Hamish! Writing this was such a pleasant journey.

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  8. Bastet Avatar
    Bastet

    This is fantastic … loved how your haiku bound the prose so very nicely .. your photo is so suggestive … brava cara!

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    1. Cheryl-Lynn Avatar
      Cheryl-Lynn

      Thank you, I have to admit I was inspired, truly drawn to just write and write this post. A very beautiful experience.

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      1. Bastet Avatar
        Bastet

        And one can see you were inspired … I’m happy you had a great experience!

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      2. Cheryl-Lynn Avatar
        Cheryl-Lynn

        🙂

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