gulls stand guard
snow speckled sand dunes
broken promises
©Tournesol ’16/01/19
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oh wow I misred “gulls” as “guilt” and then realized my error. My poor tired eyes. Great poem!
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I had originally written a haibun on my dreams to buy a place in Maine but found the haiku alone has more mystery:)
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yes it does! 🙂
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So many questions in this haiku. Excellent!
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Thank you, Janice. Yes, I deleted the narrative to keep the haiku more fluid
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