
(tanka)
staring at the waves
rolling on the river
taking hold of me
dripping true emotions
no longer wear me down.
(haiku)
river holds
roaring white rapids –
all my secrets
(c) Tournesol ’16
| STARE | RIVER | HOLD | TRUE | WEAR |
Poetry ~ Waka

(tanka)
staring at the waves
rolling on the river
taking hold of me
dripping true emotions
no longer wear me down.
(haiku)
river holds
roaring white rapids –
all my secrets
(c) Tournesol ’16
| STARE | RIVER | HOLD | TRUE | WEAR |
Wow firs the river “drips true emotions” then it holds your secrets. What lovely cycle you created!
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Thanks, Melinda, it is so easy to be inspired by water…but then again, as a Pisces it should 😉
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You’re welcome, fellow pisces! 😀 You are also right. I too am drawn to water.
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