
spreading beauty
nature bows in honour
honeysuckles bloom
Thanking our host and mentor, Chèvrefeuille at Carpe Diem Haiku Kai for teaching and inspiring us to not only write haiku or other forms of Japanese poetry (waka) but to grow in the experience…as a good parent he nurtures and breathes harmony and enlightenment among the family.
a lone flower
yearns to rise in splendour
field of sunflowers
a lone flower
searching for the sun
at one with nature
yearns to rise in splendour
embroidering each petal
one thread at a time
field of sunflowers
seventeen syllables
forming corolla
©Tournesol’16/06/01
Daily Moments – reflecting on May flowers- June 1 – 2016
beautiful. I would love to learn how to write poetry in this kind of style.
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Thank you for your kind words…wanting to write like this is such a beautiful compliment.
Then come and join CarpeDiemHaikuKai you learn at your own pace and by seeing other poetry. Everyone is very supportive and caring. If you can’t come every day…you come when you are inspired:) no pressure http://chevrefeuillescarpediem.blogspot.ca/ Our host, Chèvrefeuille (which means honeysuckle in French) is so dedicated and caring. Tournesol (by the way means, sunflower, in French)
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You wove the tapestry of this troibun splendidly!
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Thanks, Janice, the troiku inspired another haiku which I added at the top:) I really enjoyed yours on CD page too!
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