(Troiku)
in its dimness – still,
swallows announce a new day
clocks are optional
in its dimness – still,
early bird catches the worm
one peep echoes
swallows announce a new day
purple clouds transforming
pink splash in the sky
clocks are optional
as the night lifts its dimness
pup wines at the door
© Tournesol’16/07/11
A “Troiku“, it is a new form of Haiku created by Chèvrefeuille at Carpe Diem Haiku Kai.
amazing!
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Thanks 🙂
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mine is here 🙂
https://mydomainpvt.wordpress.com/2016/07/14/clock-for-haiku-horizons/
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Thanks, I am going over there to read:)
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and my second shot 🙂
https://sharmishthabasu.wordpress.com/2016/07/15/clock-for-haiku-horizons/
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I enjoyed this Troiku…well done! (note: pup “whines”) 😉
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Thanks so much, Lynn, glad you enjoyed it.
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