first autumn morning (tan renga)

 

first autumn morning
the mirror I stare into
shows my father’s face.
© Murakami Kijo

hesitantly whispers
Who are you?

©Tournesol’17/05/10

CDHK – first autumn morning

8 thoughts on “first autumn morning (tan renga)

    1. Thanks. Last year with this hokku I used my mom as the reflection…this time I thought of my dad…what a shock! But no one looks like him really. We all have traits from my mom’s side.

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