Daily reflections August 14, 2017
A Troiku is a new form of haiku created by Chèvrefeuille at Carpe Diem Haiku Kai
(Troiku)
midsummer morn
white puffs dancing in circles
moon in the sky
midsummer morn
lazy haze slowly lifting
driving east
white puffs dancing in circles
for a night owl like me
makes me dizzy
moon in the sky
even in light of day
beams at me
©Tournesol’17/08/14
Written as well for Haiku Horizons: Sky
O wow ! What a nice troiku ! The last three lines are a classic !!!!
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Thank you, Milan, that haiku is my favourite too…it was the first thought that came to mind looking up at the moon in the morning.
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Yes it’s divine !
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