first plum (Tan Renga)

A different challenge at Carpe Diem today…we are to compose the hokku to complete this tan renga.

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where the waters flow afar
the village glows with sweet plum flowers (Anonymous)

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in her mind’s eye-
sucks the juice of that first plum,
her first born


© Tournesol ’15