
Grand Canyon
panoramic view
breathtaking.
~
mystic breeze
whistles in the shade
telling tales
~
sun shines
canyon awaits
twilight
~
spirits roam
whispering legends
coyote howls.
© Cheryl-Lynn 2014/06/18
Submitted for Carpe Diem Haiku Kai #492 Canyon
Poetry ~ Waka

Grand Canyon
panoramic view
breathtaking.
~
mystic breeze
whistles in the shade
telling tales
~
sun shines
canyon awaits
twilight
~
spirits roam
whispering legends
coyote howls.
© Cheryl-Lynn 2014/06/18
Submitted for Carpe Diem Haiku Kai #492 Canyon
These are gorgeous! I think your second one is the strongest – the breeze telling tales is a GREAT image 🙂
Way to go! 😀
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Thank you so much!! I was not sure to do these but on the subway and bus I started scribbling. My fav is that one too…I actually wrote that one first this afternoon.
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That’s the way to do it — just keep scribbling and listening to what you are scribbling — and just jump into the pond! 🙂
As they say here, “ya done good”! 🙂
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I’m feeling mighty proud that you say that!! Thank you {beams}
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You’re very welcome! I hope you’ll keep writing them!
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I will but with migraines for 2 days it has been challenging…
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Oh no. I am so sorry.
Feel better soon!
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As long as I am not in pain on my holidays…working and writing are distractions actually
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At least there’s some relief in the writing ….more hugs to you !
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Thanks I was writing a silly poem on the bus and may post it on my other blog…I’m laughing just typing it.
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We need silly poems too — can hardly wait to see it 🙂
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Um, it’s on the other blog:)
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Okay! I’ll look — !
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A delightful series much enjoyed thank you.
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thank you so much for your kind words 😀
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this is really stunning both the writing andphoto, did you take the photo? I have always wanted to go there
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Oh gosh no! I have never been there before. That’s why it took awhile to write my haiku. Glad you enjoyed them.
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I did 🙂
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What a gorgeous photo … very beautiful haiku inspired on our prompt Cheryl Lynn … thank you for sharing.
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Thank you so much! I didn’t think I could do it but reading and encouragement from Jen and Georgia…well, there you have it. Congrats on the soccer game today…our office is quite pleased. 🙂
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Thank you … it’s still a bit exciting … but my country does great … I am glad to see and read that your haiku become more beautiful.
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thank you, I am learning and keep scribbling in my note book until I get one that I like:)
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Great way to finally find that perfect haiku … the classical haiku poets did that too … there is no haiku that was in it’s first form … perfect … haiku may be re-written and revised before they will be published. It is similar with a diamond … diamonds become how they from a very rough form …
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You are so encouraging! thank you for that, a good teacher!
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Thank you Cheryl-Lynn … it’s always a pleasure to encourage other haiku-poets.
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Justine asked my question. That picture of the Canyon is astounding. I knew I had been to the canyon before, a couple of times, but I had forgotten until Sreejit mentioned it that we took a horseback ride into the Grand Canyon.
Your poem is beautiful too…..
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Thank you. I searched many canyons all over the world and was surprised to see we have many in Canada too…not like Grand Canyon but still…someday I would love to visit the Fraser Canyon in BC.
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My favorite is Bryce Canyon in Utah. I went there many times. Take a look: https://www.google.com/search?site=&tbm=isch&source=hp&biw=1366&bih=631&q=bryce+canyon&oq=bryce+canyon&gs_l=img.3..0l10.330.3265.0.3957.10.5.0.1.1.0.140.370.2j2.4.0….0…1ac.1.47.img..5.5.375.EF9_s62Khcw&gws_rd=ssl
(I hope that link works…. it’s gigantic!
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Wow! I did come across this when researching canyons. Thanks for the link.
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