Missing them already (haibun)

I love traveling by rail and do as often as I can. The trek Montreal to Toronto by car can take about 5 to 6 hours and by train if I am lucky and get the express which only stops at 3 places, it takes 4 and a half hours. Some other trains can take up to 7 hours and the bus takes 6 hours and costs anywhere from $18 to $50. Just fuel to get there one way costs me $70. Now if I am really lucky, I try to book a few days before departing and can get on business class for one-third of the price. That means, I get longer leg room, can get a seat alone by the window and am paying the economy class price.

© CLR 2014 First Class Via Rail
© CLR 2014 First Class Via Rail

At business class, we get a 3-course meal with all the before dinner drinks, wine, and after dinner drinks you want. Well, I stick to a glass or two of wine but there are some who can sure pack it in. I would be crawling off the train if I tried to keep up. Last winter we were stalled for an extra two hours due to the cold weather, the tracks were iced and they could not switch tracks. So we waited for all the trains to pass on one particular track as a safety measure. I sure was glad I was in the business class…nice and roomy, blogging away on my laptop.

© CLR 2014 Lake Ontario Via Rail
© CLR 2014 Lake Ontario Via Rail

I visit once or twice a year to see my family now. I rarely go see my friends as there is not enough time but to catch a lot of my friends and colleagues, I pick up a shift in Toronto since it’s the national office of where I work. Every time I leave, I feel homesick barely a few miles out of the city. I have two places I call home since 1997 and it is with mixed feelings I leave each time.

© CLR 2014 Via Rail
© CLR 2014 Via Rail

train slows down
nearing a crossing by the lake
echoes on the beach

~

picking up speed
whizzing by lakes and farmland
my heart aches

© CLR 2014  Via Rail

© CLR 2014/7/07

Submitted for: Carpe Diem Haiku Kai   #507, Shiki, Smoke Whirls

26 thoughts on “Missing them already (haibun)

      1. You’re in the wrong country mate. I don’t know how long they will continue this practice but it’s very generous for us old folk.

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      2. You are younger than me then again most people seem to be younger than me.
        But I am well seasoned, you’d have to cook me a long time to be able to tenderise me…lol

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      3. 12C……it was about 3c last Saturday. About as cold as it gets here, we get a frost once or twice a winter, pretty barmy compared to your part of the world.

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  1. I am a big fan of travelling by train … so this haiku was very nice to introduce. Your response is really awesome and I like the whole story you have told here.

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    1. Thanks so much. You know with the early arrivals at airports and also being more out of the way, I calculated my travelling by train was shorter and cheaper and a LOT more leg room. It’s an issue when you’re tall. I love the hum,clonk, hum, clonk sound too…relaxing.

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