mystic purple flames
arise from the spirit’s stalks
chill my autumn heart © Panchali
bringing offerings to the gods
grateful for pointing the way (Chèvrefeuille)
mystic purple flames
arise from the spirit’s stalks
chill my autumn heart © Panchali
sunflower with golden glow
spreads a hint of warmth
blowing hope
through barren trees
whispers thanks in gusts
© Tournesol ‘14
Carpe Diem Tan Renga Challenge
I decided to add a haiku underlining American Thanksgiving.
Sunflower has that ability to warm us 🙂
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Yes, thank you…and I am so amazed at how they are still standing strong despite our first light snowfall.
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The additional haiku provides a great balance to a closure! Good one Cheryl!
Hank
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Thank you, Hank, I thought so too…without the haiku was stop talking in midsentence….l had to complete my thought.
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very nicely done
much love…
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Thank you so much, Gillena:)
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Again that real closeness of nature, beautifully put PS http://fly-indie.weebly.com/ligo-haibun
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Thanks so much. I`ll look at your next ligo-haibun:)
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love your renga … nice continuation:
snow flakes in November wind
melt at the first light of dawn
holly and evergreens
symbols of the season glow –
remembering spring
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heart stings for a brief moment
under the mistletoe
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ouch ..
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Wow what a wonderful and beautiful scene you have painted here with your continuation Cheryl Lynn …. I love sunflowers and they really give warmth …
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Merci, Kristjaan, j’adore les tournesols:)
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My pleasure …
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