Last night we experience strong winds and in the middle of the night it kept me awake. Tossing and turning, my mind was composing a poem, so I decided to write a poem which I posted entitled “Awaiting dawn”.
intermittent flash
signs of ill-health
power lines crash
eminent for sure
if these gusts continue
chorus of howls
like military troops
haunting yowls
beyond depths of
eternity
blow blow
blow wind blow
keep me awake
all night long
visions of buildings
crashing, floating,
hiding for cover
broken wail sounds
blow, blow
blow wind blow
you’ve not won
in destroying my home
power’s still on
I’m safe, I am warm
then why do I fidget
why can I not rest
in the dead of this night
blow blow
blow wind blow
the chorus has grown
no longer wind sound
but high giant waves
like tsunami like moan
blow blow
blow wind blow
fear not
I stand guard
awake thru the night
fear not
I stand guard
‘till the sun
shows its face gold
I shall wait for this dawn
neither tired or cold
I shall wait a bit longer
eyes open, alert
breathing slow , belaboured
suppressing a yawn.
© Clr’14
It is interesting how strong winds seem more frightening in the night and yet in the day would it not be more dangerous? I remember walking to bus some mornings on wind days and I felt pushed forward…and I am not a skinny person! I hate to see young children waiting for a bus how scary that might be or crossing a busy intersection…yikes!
In any event, I wrote this poem not really thinking the wind would die down but I knew at the break of day I would not be so frightened. At six am. I took my shower, while coffee was brewing and had not thought of the wind for I was preparing for appointments today.
Sitting down to check my email, I noticed the only sound I could hear were the cars on the boulevard in front of my apartment driving towards the bridge to get to work. I am including two haiku to complete last night. I think the second one is better but the first was my first thought…what do you think?
new dawn
gusts sank beneath the skyline
sunshine smiles
or
dawn ascends
gusty winds expired,
forgiven cool breeze
© Tournesol ’14
Tournesol dans un Jardin 
I heard that wind and am never comforted by its howling. Excellent packed with feeling.
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Thank you. I got a big surprise walking to the bus stop this morning…the wind is still very strong,it pushed me!! and sidewalks are very slippery.
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I like every bit of it! Especially the use of repetition in the longer poem–probably the best stormy wind poem I’ve ever read; and I do like both haiku: 2nd line in first one; and 3rd line in last are my faves.
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Thank you so much! The wind continued today actually. it was not noisy from inside but boy oh boy, it pushed me and I caught a matress cover outside the mall for a lady. It was funny actually. -3C but with the wind chill surely it felt like -15 brrrr. Winter has arrived one month early as it usually does here.
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Oh my goodness–wild wind! And way chilly. I have vague memories of feeling pushed by the wind–such an odd sensation, invisible hands!
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and cold hands too!
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