tripping over feet (HAIGA – TROIKU)

haiga, Haiku, Troiku 1 Minute
(c) Clr '15
(c) Clr ’15 – Flickr ntouch.roberts

pushing
race to the métro
extend my cup

pushing
shoving past me
never see me

race to the métro
tripping over tired feet
cup tips over

extend my cup
whispering my mantra,
clink of a coin

(c) Tournesol `15

A Troiku is a new form of haiky created by Chèvrefeuille at Carpe Diem.

Written for Heeding Haiku with HA at MindLoveMisery’sMenagerie – Free Reign

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A little bit about moi: I am a mom, a nana, a sister, a woman, a friend, a human being…a youth counsellor, Family Life Educator. I have been working in the helping profession for over 25 years and volunteered in various capacities from youths to seniors. Tournesol is my nom de plume for haiku and other Japanese form poetry here at Tournesoldansunjardin https://cheryllynnroberts.wordpress.com I hope you enjoy reading through my daily waka. I also have another blog "Stop the Stigma" where I may stand on my soapbox now and then and hope it will become a place to drop in and share or comment on issues important to you. In that vein this could be a great way to learn from each other. http://stigmahursteveryone.wordpress.com

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2 thoughts on “tripping over feet (HAIGA – TROIKU)”

    1. I see this everyday as well. this shot was taken at the subway I take every day to get to work; it is very vast and offers long slabs of ceramic (beddings) for homeless people that stay warm until closing time at 1am. Our subways are very warm.

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