summer’s promise (haiku)

knee deep in weeds
longs for lingering days
summer’s promise

summer’s promise
languid limbs on private beach
enchanted sighs

or as our host, Chèvrefeuille, has suggested a Tanka

knee deep in weeds
longs for lingering days
summer’s promise
languid limbs on private beach
enchanted sighs

(c) Tournesol’15

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7 thoughts on “summer’s promise (haiku)

  1. Nice set of haiku Cheryl Lynn. It can be re-formed to a tanka too:

    knee deep in weeds
    longs for lingering days
    summer’s promise
    languid limbs on private beach
    enchanted sighs

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