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A little bit about moi:
I am a mom, a nana, a sister, a woman, a friend, a human being…a youth counsellor, Family Life Educator.
I have been working in the helping profession for over 25 years and volunteered in various capacities from youths to seniors.
Tournesol is my nom de plume for haiku and other Japanese form poetry here at Tournesoldansunjardin https://cheryllynnroberts.wordpress.com I hope you enjoy reading through my daily waka.
I also have another blog "Stop the Stigma" where I may stand on my soapbox now and then and hope it will become a place to drop in and share or comment on issues important to you. In that vein this could be a great way to learn from each other.
http://stigmahursteveryone.wordpress.com
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Tournesol dans un Jardin 
One would feel naturally guilty not coming home for the night but only at pre-dawn. Good observation and good lines Cheryl!
Hank
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Ah thanks, Hank:)
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A nice kyoka .. or maybe a tanka … in the sense that you wrote it very well dear friend … though I’ve got my doubts about up-chucking people being humorous 😉
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I wanted to make it a solo renga but left it as tanka. Enough was said. The hum our of course was more tongue in cheek. I had another I may share but on the other blog. I still chuckle thinking about it.
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🙂
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Synchronicity, right enough, Cheryl-Lynn! 🙂
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Indeed! No further comment from me…….!
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*smiles*
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nice tanka !
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I may have to change my title to (Kyoka) …I just learned that the humour changed it. So much to learn!
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Its the words that counts Cheryl ! 🙂
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Thank you:)
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Its the words that count ,Cheryl!
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Nice kyoka Cheryl Lynn … it’s a nice poetry form too.
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And here I thought it was a tanka…so is it due to the humour that makes it a tanka?
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Kyoka is more meant as humorfull and satiric … tanka is more the serious way and often more for writing poems for your loved one(s).
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Thank you, Kristjaan, I am ¸understanding the nuances better now.
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