Lazy afternoon (troiku)

©Clr`16 Lac Boivin, Granby, Qc.

on a windless day
six circles take shape
a pebble skips

on a windless day
lake is like a mirror
child makes faces

six circles take shape
sparrows skip one by one
a pebble sinks

a pebble skips
child holds his breath
counting up to six

© Tournesol’16/05/15

Haiku Horizons: prompt is “skip”

A troiku is a new form of haiku created by Chèvrefeuille at CarpeDiemHaikuKai

12 thoughts on “Lazy afternoon (troiku)

  1. What a beautiful Troiku Cheryl-Lynn I was stunned by it, so I hope you don’t mind, I have chosen the haiku of this Troiku for our Tan Renga Challenge May 22nd.

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