
crackling leaves
like children on the playground
spreading their joy
crackling leaves
crunching beneath my feet
singing their goodbyes
like children on the playground
autumn wind
whistling through the leaves
spreading their joy
naked branches welcoming
long awaited sleep
©Tournesol’16/10/30
Daily Moments – giggling leaves (Troiku) October 30, 2016
We are inspired by the beautiful words of Kala Ramesh at Carpe Diem Haiku Kai:
seeing the whole
blossom contained
in a seed
I look up to the sky
with all the stars
illusions ride
on a fast fading rainbow
somewhere there
I let go of my childhood…
I must have
© Kala Ramesh
I’ve written a Troiku inspired both by Ramesh’s words and the photo below. To know more how to write a troiku which is a new form of haiku created by Chèvrefeuille, check on his website here Carpe Diem Haiku Kai
Ah, yes, farewell to a season. This is beautiful….I love troiku, well done!
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Thanks, Mother Willow, the burst of colours are a nice sendoff.
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Lovely and the last line is splendid!
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Thanks, Janice, I like it too…I was pleased to find something positive of the change of seasons:)
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Very pleasant !
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Thanks so much for stopping by and commenting 🙂
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Touches of Robert Frost to this,..
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Aw, I am humbled by such a comment! thank you:)
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Wonderful Frost like troiku Cheryl Lynn
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Thanks so much, Kristjaan, for such a lovely comment. Every time I looked at this photo I kept hearing children giggling.
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