deep silence
the shrill of cicadas
seeps into rocks © Matsuo Bashō (1644-1694)
soothing fledglings
mid-day lullaby ©Tournesol’17
remembering
yesterday
when you were here ©Tournesol’17
soft winter breeze cherishes
the last colorful leaves © Chèvrefeuille
For the first Tan Renga our host has given us the first stanza by Basho (the hokku) and the second Tan Renga, our host gives the second stanza of two lines so we can create the first stanza (hokku). See more at Carpe Diem Haiku Kai for instructions as well as visiting other participants’ contributions.
This last exercise awakened my longing for her…
(troiku) a new form of haiku created by Chèvrefeuille at CDHK
remembering
yesterday
when you were here
remembering
scent of Givenchy
caressing me
yesterday
tumbling down the stairs
you kissed the boo-boo
when you were here
I was always
your little girl
©Tournesol’17/11/23
(naani)
how I miss your laugh
your soothing voice
telling me not to worry ~ just pray
three Hail Mary’s before I sleep
©Tournesol’17/11/23
Daily Moments Your Little Girl Troiku – November 23 2017
This Troiku and Naani is written for MicroPoetry Month#23
Tournesol dans un Jardin 
Oh such soft beautiful memories running through them all.. thanks so much for sharing with micropoetry month!!
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I had written the troiku but then I noticed your prompt and was pleased to add the naani…such a nice form.
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this is deeply unique, deeply touching memories and words!!
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Thank you, I’m pleased you enjoyed it.
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I love the tenderness in each of them.
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Thank you so much for your kind words 🙂
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Excellent post
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Thank you, Kristjaan.
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