Mountain view
city lights at night
victim of beauty
© Tournesol ’15
Poetry ~ Waka
Mountain view
city lights at night
victim of beauty
© Tournesol ’15
waves in the sky
March winds blow her hat off
rolling clouds
(c) Tournesol ’15
Back to Basics – Carpe Diem Writing Techniques
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holding folded flag
bugle sounds that tap the soul
weeping for her son
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weeping for her son
honour does not spare a life,
curses every war
(c) Tournesol ’15
Dear Haijin, visitors and travelers,
This week’s episode of our Haiku Writing Techniques had to be the first episode I think, but I have chosen to bring this later up in time. As you all know I am not a big fan of the classical way of haiku writing, because I think that our Western languages aren’t compatible with the sound units of the Japanese language. A while ago we had the discussion here about the so called “Kanshicho-style” of haiku writing (no syllables, no strict kigo and so on). This “Kanshicho-style” looks very similar with the “free style” of Santoka Taneda which we have discussed in our last episode of Haiku Writing Techniques.
Why do I have to do this episode? Well … it’s not a must or something, but just to bring it again under your attention that there are classical rules. There have been a lot of rules during the history of haiku which came and which were lost, and came back again … like the waves.
I just love to share an episode about these classical rules. First I will start with a haiku by Basho, which you all will know for sure:
A lovely gift from Italy:)
a sunflower
flies towards freedom
through sky and sea
© G.s.k. ‘15
A very happy birthday to you dear Tournesol and may you find many lovely rainbows!

Walking home after school in spring, she drags her feet singing “Cherish” under her breath. The sun was still shining but a few clouds started moving overhead slowly. She hardly noticed droplets on her chin. Looking up she smiles, knowing somewhere there will be a rainbow.
dancing softly
tiny puddles on the river
raindrops
~
warm droplets
kiss her eyelashes
sun winks
© Tournesol ’15

pushing
race to the métro
extend my cup
pushing
shoving past me
never see me
race to the métro
tripping over tired feet
cup tips over
extend my cup
whispering my mantra,
clink of a coin
(c) Tournesol `15
A Troiku is a new form of haiky created by Chèvrefeuille at Carpe Diem.
Written for Heeding Haiku with HA at MindLoveMisery’sMenagerie – Free Reign
a perfect day
sky so blue
surreal
sun aglow
warms winter’s hands
melting snow
I burst with love
from every pore
to feel so prised
and ever more
heart melted like sun stroked frost
frozen ponds and icy streams
this felt just like
those corny dreams
it was in fact
a perfect day
a birthday spell
that fills my heart
still feel it swell.
icicles
would surely melt
my heart’s aglow
© Tournesol ’15