Our host explains Writing Techniques #10, “back to basic”

Carpe Diem Haiku Writing Techniques #10, “back to basic”

Dear Haijin, visitors and travelers,

This week’s episode of our Haiku Writing Techniques had to be the first episode I think, but I have chosen to bring this later up in time. As you all know I am not a big fan of the classical way of haiku writing, because I think that our Western languages aren’t compatible with the sound units of the Japanese language. A while ago we had the discussion here about the so called “Kanshicho-style” of haiku writing (no syllables, no strict kigo and so on). This “Kanshicho-style” looks very similar with the “free style” of Santoka Taneda which we have discussed in our last episode of Haiku Writing Techniques.

Those family members who are here a long time, almost from the start of CDHK, know that we have had a special feature titled “Back to Basic” in which the goal was to write a haiku following the classical rules …

Why do I have to do this episode? Well … it’s not a must or something, but just to bring it again under your attention that there are classical rules. There have been a lot of rules during the history of haiku which came and which were lost, and came back again …  like the waves.
I just love to share an episode about these classical rules. First I will start with a haiku by Basho, which you all will know for sure:

Click here to read more on the basics of Haiku our mentor and host Chèvrefeuille explains more...HERE

Happy Birthday Haiga – March 9, 2015

A lovely gift from Italy:)

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a sunflower
flies towards freedom
through sky and sea

© G.s.k. ‘15

A very happy birthday to you dear Tournesol and may you find many lovely rainbows!

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cherished droplets (haibun)

@ Danimatie – Deviantart “Raindrops in the water”

Walking home after school in spring, she drags her feet singing “Cherish” under her breath. The sun was still shining but a few clouds started moving overhead slowly. She hardly noticed droplets on her chin. Looking up she smiles, knowing somewhere there will be a rainbow.

dancing softly
tiny puddles on the river
raindrops

~
warm droplets
kiss her eyelashes
sun winks

© Tournesol ’15

tripping over feet (HAIGA – TROIKU)

(c) Clr '15
(c) Clr ’15 – Flickr ntouch.roberts

pushing
race to the métro
extend my cup

pushing
shoving past me
never see me

race to the métro
tripping over tired feet
cup tips over

extend my cup
whispering my mantra,
clink of a coin

(c) Tournesol `15

A Troiku is a new form of haiky created by Chèvrefeuille at Carpe Diem.

Written for Heeding Haiku with HA at MindLoveMisery’sMenagerie – Free Reign

a perfect day (haiga)



kitchen view river march 6th

a perfect day
sky so blue
surreal

 sun aglow
warms winter’s hands
melting snow

kitchen view icicles

I burst with love
from every pore
to feel so prised
and ever more
heart melted like sun stroked frost
frozen ponds and icy streams

this felt just like
those corny dreams
it was in fact
a perfect day
a birthday spell
that fills my heart
still feel it swell.

kitchen view March 6th icicles

icicles
would surely melt
my heart’s aglow

© Tournesol ’15

spring bath (haiga)

© wunderground

chirping

communal bath

mud puddle

© Tournesol ’15

Carpe Diem “Puddles”

jamming (haiga)

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Smokey Bar © JazzonTheTube.com Edited: Clr ’15

Jazz Fest turns in
crowds in smoky jazz bar
night is still young
jammin’ until five a.m.
listening to Vic Vogel
~
smokey bar
sultry jazz oozes
amber’s heat

© Tournesol ’15

Vic Vogel Trio with Dave Turner (Montreal Jazz Festival)

Fowl play (haiga)

© Tournesol '14
© Tournesol ’14

 

tills the soil,
calculating his harvest,
sows the fields

works night and day,
you’d surely be envious
noble farmer

nuisance prevails
gorging leaves messy field,
pot belly crows

© Tournesol ’15

3Word Wednesday – calculating, envious, messy

flower power (haiga)

hippy love
Pinterest – Hippy Love

chasing playfully
in the open meadow
tag you’re it!

giggling like children
old shed in the meadow
playing naughty

© Tournesol’15

Carpe Diem “Meadow”

treasures (haiku)

 

journeys through time
photos of long ago
treasured gifts

&

mother and father
gifted with sounds
newborn’s cry

© Tournesol ’15

Haiku Horizons “gift”