Carp Diem Haiku Kai – Carpe Diem Tan Renga Challenge #37, Celestine’s “ribbon of colours”
ribbon of colours
streaks across the endless sky
dance of the spirits
ancestors’ rainbows whisper,
swirl in rhythmic harmony.
© Cheryl-Lynn 2014/05/31
Poetry ~ Waka
ribbon of colours
streaks across the endless sky
dance of the spirits
ancestors’ rainbows whisper,
swirl in rhythmic harmony.
© Cheryl-Lynn 2014/05/31
Lovely 🙂
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Thank you so much…I have so much to learn with these forms but practise will help. There are some amazing offerings | have read…wow!
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🙂
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Nice Cheryl-Lynn…love your take on this!
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Thanks, Georgia. I am reminded of stories youths have shared with me about their ancestors. One youth was suicidal, living up North and I asked him about the Northern Lights, his tone changed, he talked about his ancestors come back to tell them they are well on the other side. I asked him, “But wouldn’t they say you still have things to finish up before crossing over?” That shifted the all to one of hope:)
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Fantastic story and really inspirational your taking him to a different level of though! Thanks for sharing this with me. 🙂
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Ilove that story too…he called me 2 days later from hospital to thank me;)
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hmmm… think that’s a postive for you ….
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Nice continuation of this Tan Renga Cheryl-Lynn. Welcome at Carpe Diem Haiku Kai, I am your host there.
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Thank you, I hope to learn in the process of writing and reading from talented and creative writers.
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Carpe Diem Haiku Kai is a great place to learn Cheryl-Lynn
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Lovely completion, Cheryl. 🙂
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