
Carpe Diem Haiku Kai #485 Oneness
Oneness makes me think on so many varied situations that do create a sense of harmony, unity, to be ONE. Here are my humble thoughts.
la pomme tombe
embrasse le gazon
le ver grignote
l’hirondelle attend
guette le ver au sol
repas de vainqueur.
mélodie soupire
amoureux fleurent la flamme
danse langoureusement
nouveau-né pleure
nourrit au sein de sa mère
harmonie.
fallen apple
kissed the grass
worm nibbles.
robin waits
sees the worm below
victor`s feast.
new-born whimpers
nurses at his mother`s breast
oneness
sultry music croons
steamy lovers feel the heat
slow dancing.
© Cheryl-Lynn 2014/06/05
Oneness!! This is beautiful! I love you photo art too!😄😄
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Thank you, Michelle Marie…I don’t get credit for the photo…that is from the prompt…I should illustrate that right now…{fixing…..}
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Wonderful series Cheryl Lynn … these are very strong and so in touch with Oneness
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Thank you, I introduced haiku to a few of my colleagues and they were quite impressed.
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That’s great Cheryl … haiku must become more known …
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Yes it is not as known in my French Quebecois culture.
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There is a lot to promote there in French Quebec
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a nice montage of “oneness.”
nicely done
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Thanks so much for your kind words and for reading.
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You’ve done a fantastic job with this prompt absolutely breath-taking! I think you’ve caught the knack and I loved your:
fallen apple
kissed the grass
worm nibbles.
a full cycle complete and with so few words!
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That was my first one and I enjoyed that one too…poor bugger of a worm…haha meets his fate later
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it was fun … didn’t think of him meting his fate later, poor guy!
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…karma!
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🙂 yep … there’s always a later anyway though isn’t there!
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