Waterfalls – chutes – haiga (CPHKFamily #1)

(c) Clr - 2014 Yamaska River
(c) Clr – 2014 Yamaska River

affligée par la vie

penchant sur la rive

larmes en cascades

& 

tous les peines

déversent en abondances

chutes acceuillent

& 

craintes, peines

répands en cascades

paisible

 

flexibility

rooftops, concrete buildings

city waterfalls

 

river flows

emotions over dams

waterfalls

waterfalls

imitate

tears

 &

river holds

lamenting grief

waterfall

 &

river listens

waterfalls

drown regrets

© Tournesol 2014/07/30

Photo credits: clr- Tournesol ‘2014

Submitted for: CarpeDiemHaikuFamily#1Waterfall

15 thoughts on “Waterfalls – chutes – haiga (CPHKFamily #1)”

  1. You were inspired Cheryl Lynn, what a wonderful series of haiku, I like those French ones, but your English haiku are awesome. Thank you for sharing in this haiku-reprise feature.

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    1. thank you, Kristjaan, I am practicing every day and reading so I think that helps:) I do prefer the English ones too but I felt bad that I had not tried French enough. I will wait to purchase a book translated by Lanoue who has French and English translations on Haiku.

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      1. David Gerard Lanoue had several translations…one I saw yesterday at Amazon Haiku if the matters in english, French, German and Spanish. The best prices are in the US though…there are many e books but I want an illustrated book. I ordered a few yesterday.

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    1. The reader didn’t show the English portion of the post, but for some reason I got a glimpse of the last comment when I sent my mine. So I opened up the whole post and was able to see your haiku in English too!

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