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au revoir feuillage
repose bien verdure
accueillant l’hiver

l’arrivé du froid
le charme des glaçons bijoux
flocons émerveillent

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farewell foliage
rest well verdure
welcome winter

advent of cold
magic of icicle gems
snowflake enchantments

(c) Tournesol ’14

Carpe Diem “Exodus”

16 responses to “flocon de neige (haiga)”

  1. Paislee Blu Avatar

    Oh my, this sparkles beautifully!

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    1. Cheryl-Lynn @ Tournesol & Stigmahurtseveryone Avatar

      Thanks you, icicles do that:)

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      1. Paislee Blu Avatar

        Don’t they though? And no batteries needed!

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      2. Cheryl-Lynn @ Tournesol & Stigmahurtseveryone Avatar

        and they’re free!

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      3. Paislee Blu Avatar

        Yippee–a bargain!

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  2. Morrow Avatar

    Can only echo my previous comment!

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  3. kaykuala h Avatar

    Your second stanza emits magical shines of gems! Great word craft Cheryl!

    Hank

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    1. Cheryl-Lynn @ Tournesol & Stigmahurtseveryone Avatar

      Thank you so much for your kind words, glad you enjoyed this…it was difficult translating into English.

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  4. Bastet Avatar

    c’est parfait!

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  5. magicalmysticalteacher Avatar
    magicalmysticalteacher

    “farewell foliage”

    There is both enigma and pathos in this simple line…

    Exodus

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  6. moondustwriter Avatar

    French is a much more poetic language. This is magically sculpted

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    1. Cheryl-Lynn @ Tournesol & Stigmahurtseveryone Avatar

      Thank you, like the wind sculpts the snow:)

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  7. Rallentanda Goossens Avatar

    Lovely snow flake haiku…will think of you when surfing…Toodle pip !

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    1. Cheryl-Lynn @ Tournesol & Stigmahurtseveryone Avatar

      Now cut that out!!!

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  8. martha0stout Avatar

    Welcome welcome Winter morning!

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