the world just watches (tanka)

Vicious assaults
rarely admonished
hushed cries
breath only  despair
women and children

© Tournesol `14

Heeding Haiku with Ha

9 thoughts on “the world just watches (tanka)

      1. I am from India. A mindset of violence, dominance and patriarchy is abound in many people throughout the world. Yes, there are places where instances that you refer to in your tanka take place relatively in larger numbers, but that doesn’t mean that only these places are plagued by such social issues. For instance, the countries with the most cases of child sexual abuse include countries such as UK and US as well.
        Just thought of putting across my thoughts. Please do not mind.

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