near you (haiku)

Caroline Michaud Photographie
© Caroline Michaud Photographie

breathing,
when I’m near you
quickens

when I’m near you
sun never sets
heart liquifies

quickens
my pulse and breathing
heavier.

© Tournesol ’14

Haiku Horizons “near”

7 responses to “near you (haiku)”

  1. Alice Keys Avatar
    Alice Keys

    Wow. You wrote a very tiny,very hot micro-fiction romance novel from this prompt. I have to stop and pant in amazement when I stand too near my computer now. 😉 I love it.
    Alice

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    1. Cheryl-Lynn Avatar
      Cheryl-Lynn

      Yes, well, my screen got all fogged up when I was done 😉

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      1. Alice Keys Avatar
        Alice Keys

        ((HAR HAR HAR)) Mine, too. 🙂

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  2. Paislee Blu Avatar
    Paislee Blu

    Ooooohh, I do love this!! And I can almost smell the candles in the header pic!

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    1. Cheryl-Lynn Avatar
      Cheryl-Lynn

      Glad you liked it, Blu:)

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  3. Gemma Wiseman Avatar
    Gemma Wiseman

    The pangs and the pulses of passion…

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    1. Cheryl-Lynn Avatar
      Cheryl-Lynn

      Yes indeed, universally understood.

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