Blades cutting,
lovers embraced skate
under the stars
lovers embraced skate
searching for the full moon
behind the clouds
under the stars
lovers make promises
beneath the Milky Way
© Tournesol ’14
13 responses to “promised under the stars (haiga)”
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Cheryl-Lynn, I love your star loving skating lovers looking for the moon. I can en-vision them skating right now. Very romantic, huh?
I did find this morning an MSN news report of a “new” galaxy that was found near the Milky Way.
The link is in my ‘Note 3’ under my Carpe Diem poem and pictures.
http://jimmiehov6.blogspot.com/
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I am off to check this out, thank you so much. I’m pleased you enjoyed this poem. I was thinking of the river behind my grandmother’s house and the couple was my uncle and his gf…many moons ago, skating on the river.
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It is…back in the day when we had long cold winters and no thaw in between, it was safe and fun…so much freedom skating on a river rather a boarded up rink.
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Ah lucky!! it is way too warm here now…not a spot of snow anywhere:( hopefully it will pick up…especially around the lakes to go ice fishing.
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Tournesol dans un Jardin 
Your comments are like sunflowers beaming at me:Vos commentaires sont des sourires des Tournesols