
(choka)
winter wonderland
snow filling my balcony
sipping my java
redundant image I see
cars slowing their speed
public transit the smart means
at twenty below
feels like minus thirty-five
dressing warm for work
wrapped in wool and feather lined
with studs on my boots
sun still pierces through the clouds
squinting and slogging
shuffling my way to the bus
admiring this winter scene
~
(haiku)
snow covered path
shadow at my side, leaves me
I get on the bus
© Tournesol ’15
CP Special Fuyuko Tomita’s “shadow”
I’m shivering x
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My teeth are chattering and my cheeks are burning from the wind.
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crickey andwe just had our first snowfall here but i dont think it will stay today yikes x
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very lovely imagery. nice one!
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thank you…at least this bitter cold has pretty images:)
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Beautiful Choka, not really my kind of poetry, but I like this one. Your haiku is resonating the sphere of Fuyuko Tomita’s haiku which I gave.
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I usually put choka on my other blog but felt my sharing my day blended well with the haiku. Thanks so much, Kristjaan. I may write another, I just didn`t have time to find the shadow photo I had taken.
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