such a malice
cherry blossoms in full bloom
the Spring wind!

© Chèvrefeuille

such a malice
cherry blossoms in full bloom
the Spring wind!

gusts rip such soft petals
sprinkling pink on park grounds

pacific wind
competes with silk beauty
on Stanley Park

some still cling to branches
braving these ocean winds

© Tournesol ’15

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11 responses to “Soliloquy No Renga “the spring wind!””

  1. Yer Forest Pirate Avatar

    This flowing style creates great imagery. I can ‘see’ that park…

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    1. Tournesol (Clr) Avatar

      thanks so much, Hamish, it is a beautiful park filled with cherry trees given to Vancouver years ago from Japan.

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  2. Bastet Avatar

    brave are the blossoms who stand before the ocean breeze! Nicely written!

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    1. Tournesol (Clr) Avatar

      Thank you, cara,
      blossoms with enduring love
      soften souls and quench the soul

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      1. Bastet Avatar

        beautifully stated!

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  3. moondustwriter Avatar

    Already plotting our visit to see the cherry trees in case the winds get jealous of all the attention.

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    1. Tournesol (Clr) Avatar

      Smart move. I am going to hope I still have a week to get to Toronto to see…a bit closer than Stanley Park:)

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  4. janicead Avatar

    So beautiful!

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    1. Tournesol (Clr) Avatar

      Thanks Janice… Hope you are well

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  5. Chèvrefeuille Avatar

    What a wonderful Solo renga Cheryl Lynn

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    1. Tournesol (Clr) Avatar

      Thank you, Kristjaan, I’m pleased you liked this completion:)

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