autumn wind (tan renga)

© Clr ’14

howling wind —
an autumn note within
the bamboo flute (Kala Ramesh)

rustling leaves prepare to fall
whistling wind turns into shrills

trembling twigs
awaiting emptiness
their naked fate

© Tournesol ’15

6 thoughts on “autumn wind (tan renga)

  1. This is an interesting and sad finish! Let me add:

    first snow flakes fall
    upon the waiting empty twigs
    dressing them in white

    in their naked purity
    fragile winter beauty

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  2. I, too, loved this one and was inspired by it.

    “trembling twigs
    awaiting emptiness
    their naked fate”

    Declare the state for which all
    Things ultimately await

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