house on a hill (haiku)

CARPE DIEM HAIKU KAI, Haiku 1 Minute

beach house view
seagulls circle an old widow
 muted wails

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A little bit about moi: I am a mom, a nana, a sister, a woman, a friend, a human being…a youth counsellor, Family Life Educator. I have been working in the helping profession for over 25 years and volunteered in various capacities from youths to seniors. Tournesol is my nom de plume for haiku and other Japanese form poetry here at Tournesoldansunjardin https://cheryllynnroberts.wordpress.com I hope you enjoy reading through my daily waka. I also have another blog "Stop the Stigma" where I may stand on my soapbox now and then and hope it will become a place to drop in and share or comment on issues important to you. In that vein this could be a great way to learn from each other. http://stigmahursteveryone.wordpress.com

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  3. I really like how the perspective shifts from one line to the next, throughout – it keeps the reader off balance and makes the last line arrive with all the more force.

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