intimate yet free
sucking on sweet nectar
hums the bird
unquenched thirst
wings a blur with such flurry
another blossom
time to rest
jagged edge of fragile twig
hummingbird’s perch
© Tournesol ’15
Poetry ~ Waka
intimate yet free
sucking on sweet nectar
hums the bird
unquenched thirst
wings a blur with such flurry
another blossom
time to rest
jagged edge of fragile twig
hummingbird’s perch
© Tournesol ’15
Cheryl-Lynn, such a delightful moment you have painted!
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Thank you, Janice:)
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Nicely done !!
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Thanks, Chris:)
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delightful. A whimsical and fleeting moment of beauty
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Thank you,Suzane.
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beautifully done 🙂
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I`m honoured…not writing much these days unless my muse does it all for me.
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I’m sorry to hear that — here’s hoping the muses are kind to you 🙂
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I think they are actually since I put more trust in my muse and take time for me.
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This is really delightful! I loved the series!!
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thank you:)
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What a sweet little story you have made from this prompt. Three nicely composed haiku telling the story in delicate words.
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thank you, Kristjaan, I’m pleased you enjoyed the story:)
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Loved this a lot…
spectacular in the jagged edges of mind
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Thanks so much…I just had a look at one of your poems…wow! relationship with your hat…love that line!
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we had hummingbirds for years build their tiny nests in our berry bushes. I’d marvel at their slim perches that other birds would break in a moment – a sweet hush lies about your verse waiting for these winged beauties to zi
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They certainly are amazing…what would we do without them and butterflies?
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Lovely Cher … this a cool series … and nice to see the muses have visited you!
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she comes and goes and I stopped trying to figure her out. I think my mom is distracting her.
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Could be … these moments do pop up from time to time .. I usually have the problem when my mind is distracted by problems or everyday chaos … which is why I usuallycan only write at dawn.
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And I just before dawn:) but I need to sleep …haha
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Very nice.
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Thanks, Celestine:)
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