mon premier amour (haiku)

This serene painting  le poète allongé  captures a touching moment in the life of Marc Chagall, one of Russia’s greatest unconventional artists and his wife Bella Rosenfeld.

Completed during their honeymoon in 1915, it shows the artist reclining dreamily in front of the family’s dacha. He lies stretched on the grass, his body dramatically elongated, with the vast majority of the picture taken up with a violet sky and green pine forest landscape, home to a modest farmhouse and its animals.

Here is my second offering in this prompt at Heeding Haiku with Ha, a positive and dreamy version.

(haiku)

rosa bella
blushing bride sighs
lone pig squeals

~
time stands still
illicit dreams arouse
the old mare snorts

~
an artist’s vision
canvas scented pine
purple brush strokes 

© Tournesol ’15

18 responses to “mon premier amour (haiku)”

  1. janicead Avatar
    janicead

    You have painted such a beautiful haibun and haiku series. Love each of these.

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    1. Tournesol (Clr) Avatar
      Tournesol (Clr)

      Thanks, Janice, I got carried away with the history in my first posting but this reflects more (I think) the moment.

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  2. anmol(alias HA) Avatar
    anmol(alias HA)

    “purple brush strokes”: Love that.

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    1. Tournesol (Clr) Avatar
      Tournesol (Clr)

      Thank you:)

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  3. Brenda Davis Harsham Avatar
    Brenda Davis Harsham

    Such perfect words painting a delightful story.

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    1. Tournesol (Clr) Avatar
      Tournesol (Clr)

      Thank you, Brenda. I hope I came close to his thoughts in this painting:)

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  4. Bastet Avatar
    Bastet

    What an interesting interpretation of the painting .. I enjoyed this very much.

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    1. Tournesol (Clr) Avatar
      Tournesol (Clr)

      Bella was Chagall`s first wife and this is the place they had honeymooned in their motherland, Russia.

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      1. Bastet Avatar
        Bastet

        I didn’t know that … nice to pick up these nice bits of info.

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      2. Tournesol (Clr) Avatar
        Tournesol (Clr)

        Fortunately he left Russia and moved to France and continued painting.

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      3. Bastet Avatar
        Bastet

        True and painted some extraordinary pictures too.

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      4. Tournesol (Clr) Avatar
        Tournesol (Clr)

        He really did such beautiful masterpieces.

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      5. Bastet Avatar
        Bastet

        I agree … I should like to pick one of his paintings to illustrate a poem!

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      6. Tournesol (Clr) Avatar
        Tournesol (Clr)

        Great Idea, cara! I look forward to reading that.

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      7. Bastet Avatar
        Bastet

        Now, I just have to remember to do that!

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      8. Tournesol (Clr) Avatar
        Tournesol (Clr)

        Yes, well, that is another issue…lol

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      9. Bastet Avatar
        Bastet

        I wrote myself an e-mail so I’ll remember when I read it 😉

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      10. Tournesol (Clr) Avatar
        Tournesol (Clr)

        Oh I do that too:) great idea!!

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