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A little bit about moi:
I am a mom, a nana, a sister, a woman, a friend, a human being…a youth counsellor, Family Life Educator.
I have been working in the helping profession for over 25 years and volunteered in various capacities from youths to seniors.
Tournesol is my nom de plume for haiku and other Japanese form poetry here at Tournesoldansunjardin https://cheryllynnroberts.wordpress.com I hope you enjoy reading through my daily waka.
I also have another blog "Stop the Stigma" where I may stand on my soapbox now and then and hope it will become a place to drop in and share or comment on issues important to you. In that vein this could be a great way to learn from each other.
http://stigmahursteveryone.wordpress.com
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well written
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Thanks so much for your kind words:)
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Last line blew me away… Amazing .. Beautifully written..
I am here: http://rameshsood.blogspot.in/2015/08/who-is-leading-whom-haiku.html
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I take that as a compliment if a line shocked you. I changed that line so many times and came back to this original thought.
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Amazing work, my friend. 🙂
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Thanks so much, Celestine!
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Excellent work
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Thanks so much!!
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I do like the progression of this.
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Thank you! troiku is an interesting form to write,
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i love the sinful bliss of rose ! What an idea wow Cheryl !
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Thanks so much, Milan. I wavered with a few different lines for that last one…so glad you liked this:)
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And you found the perfect line !
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Thanks so much, I appreciate that.
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sweet temptation, eh?
lovely lines Cheryl 🙂
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Thank you …glad you enjoyed this poem:)
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Oscar Wilde said
I can resist anything except temptation LOL.
He also said
Always forgive your enemies…nothing annoys them so much !
Good use of the Troiku form..
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Oh!!! I love both quotes!! The second one reminds me when my children were at a stage of resisting…and wanted/needed a bit of a fight. I would have to hide my smile and look stern…if I smiled or said something tinkerbellish, “Ah mommy still loves you” that would send them off in a puff:)
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I took delight in your word play.:-)
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Thanks! I just realized the innocent woman is Rose and wonder how that relates to Rose from your book 😉
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I wondered for a moment. Rose is one of my all-time favorite woman character names. Jim is my favorite guy name. 🙂
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I know!!:)
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