deceiving beauty (tanka)

Inspired by our host’s haiku:

her beauty
takes the life of the Lake
Water Hyacinth
© Chèvrefeuille

misleading beauty
industries and farms purge,
Yamaska River
running through villages
like Saint-Hyacinthe

© Tournesol’15

Carpe Diem

*Monitoring rivers running into the Saint Lawrence

6 responses to “deceiving beauty (tanka)”

  1. Bastet Avatar
    Bastet

    Nicely done indeed!

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    1. Cheryl-Lynn Avatar
      Cheryl-Lynn

      Thanks…it was not poetic but important to share.

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      1. Bastet Avatar
        Bastet

        Very true.

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  2. Forest Tinker Avatar
    Forest Tinker

    A very literary and philosophical haiku. I like that.

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    1. Cheryl-Lynn Avatar
      Cheryl-Lynn

      ah yes…a cause, not poetic but a topic that must be addressed.

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  3. janicead Avatar
    janicead

    Never could get the water hyacinth to grow in the watergarden. Guess it was too clean… Love the haiku and the statement.

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