
overwhelmed
nature’s boasting colours
nature’s beauty
nature’s beauty
wrapped in fall’s duvet
autumn’s dress
autumn’s dress
summer loves exposed
barren limbs
barren limbs
shiver in autumn’s breeze
wait for winter’s coat
© Tournesol ’15

Poetry ~ Waka

overwhelmed
nature’s boasting colours
nature’s beauty
nature’s beauty
wrapped in fall’s duvet
autumn’s dress
autumn’s dress
summer loves exposed
barren limbs
barren limbs
shiver in autumn’s breeze
wait for winter’s coat
© Tournesol ’15

Beautiful. Missing the colors this year.
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Thanks, Janice, yes the colours are lovely. I may complain of the cold but I do enjoy 4 seasons here:)
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I love the repetition. It drives one haiku into the next like a song–one of color and beauty. 🙂
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What a lovely compliment, thank you:)
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You’re welcome 🙂
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Wow! Beautiful! Amazing pictures too.
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Autumn boasts with such colourful pride.
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Is this a certain form? I like how you made it flow…like leaves changing color!
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it is a cascade of haiku…thanks, Lynn, repeating the last line to the next stanza may help to make it flow.
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All that colour! 🙂
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I know eh? I enjoy this for many reasons…with the short days, I miss out on my sunsets at work during my breaks…so at least in autumn I get colours before I get to work.
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