morning after (tan renga)

,

raindrops on bamboo
shimmer in the sunlight
little diamonds
© Chèvrefeuille

hot summer breeze chills
that morning afterglow

reflects a faint glint
in his eyes – she breathes
his name

© Tournesol ‘15

Carpe Diem Tan Renga Challenge

7 responses to “morning after (tan renga)”

  1. Ye Pirate Avatar
    Ye Pirate

    Mmm…very sensual

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    1. Cheryl-Lynn Avatar
      Cheryl-Lynn

      Thanks, actually it was the first line of your completion that inspired me to write this second completion

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      1. Ye Pirate Avatar
        Ye Pirate

        Lovely……!

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  2. readinpleasure Avatar
    readinpleasure

    Lovely sensuality, 🙂

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    1. Cheryl-Lynn Avatar
      Cheryl-Lynn

      Thanks, Celestine.

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  3. Dancing Echoes Avatar
    Dancing Echoes

    I LOVE this!

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    1. Cheryl-Lynn Avatar
      Cheryl-Lynn

      Thank you, I’m pleased you enjoy this:)

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