Her mother was a hairstylist and hours were not accounted for in those days. Saturday could finish for dinner or as late as midnight depending on the influx of clients. Money was “notre gange pain” to survive in those says with only her mother who was reliable.

Her mother was a hairstylist and hours were not accounted for in those days.  Saturday might have ended just in time for dinner or as late as midnight depending on the influx of clients.  Money was “notre gang pain” to survive in those says with only her mother supporting the family.

There were times when her mother was not ready Sunday mornings for mass and she would ask her daughters to walk to church ahead of her so they would not be late for services.  She promised she would get there in time before the consecration when the bells would chime, “Lord have mercy,” “Christ have mercy”.  Later, she  would hear her mother arriving  …

Youth Dew – Estée Lauder

scent of Youth Dew soothes,
clicking of mother`s stilettos
echoes of her cough

© Tournesol ’16/01/31

21 responses to “sensing Maman (haibun)”

  1. Bastet Avatar

    The ku looks like an ad .. was this intended?

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    1. Cheryl-Lynn Avatar

      I had to put the bottle of Youth Dew because it was on my mother’s dresser all throughout my childhood 🙂

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      1. Bastet Avatar

        Ah … yes I understand … funny how it actually looked like an ad! The haibun is really lovely.

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      2. Cheryl-Lynn Avatar

        Thank you, cara, I may order a bottle just as a souvenir

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      3. Bastet Avatar

        LOL .. sounds like that could be a nice idea.

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  2. writersdream9 Avatar

    Sounds do trigger our memories! Lovely.

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    1. Cheryl-Lynn Avatar

      Sounds and scents certainly do. Thanks for reading, Carol:)

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      1. writersdream9 Avatar

        My pleasure!

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    2. Melinda Kucsera Avatar

      I agree! A poignant poem 🙂

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      1. Cheryl-Lynn Avatar

        Thank you:)

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      2. Melinda Kucsera Avatar

        You’re welcome 🙂

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  3. janicead Avatar

    What a sweet memory. Oh, how the aromas trigger emotions.

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    1. Cheryl-Lynn Avatar

      They do indeed. I know you must be sensing your mom too.

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  4. kaykuala (@hankkaykuala) Avatar

    clicking of mother`s stilettos
    echoes of her cough

    These are signs that indicate she has arrived. Nicely Cheryl!

    Hank

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  5. kaykuala (@hankkaykuala) Avatar

    clicking of mother`s stilettos
    echoes of her cough

    Signs to show she has arrived!

    Hank

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    1. Cheryl-Lynn Avatar

      Yes, and in a church the echo is so loud.

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  6. kaykuala (@hankkaykuala) Avatar

    clicking of mother`s stilettos
    echoes of her cough

    These are signs to show she has arrived

    Hank

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  7. Chèvrefeuille Avatar

    Hearing those special sounds who are triggering memories aren’t always pleasant. Not so long ago I heard the favorite Electric Light Orchestra (ELO) hit of my brother on the radio. It triggered nice memories, but made me also very sad … My brother died more than 20 years ago and I am still missing him.

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    1. Chèvrefeuille Avatar

      By the way that hit was Mr. Blue Sky

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      1. Cheryl-Lynn Avatar

        Very nice song…has a hint of Beatles in this one.

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    2. Cheryl-Lynn Avatar

      so true, Kristjaan, sound is so poignant. I used to play Oscar Peterson for my mother who was in her last stage of Alzheimer and I would see life come back in her eyes. You will always miss your brother, Kristjaan. He was blessed with a sensitive and compassionate brother.

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