girl on a swing (haibun)

Emily eats her  cookie on the swing  in back of the cottage surrounded by rose bushes, plum trees, a cherry tree and several milkweeds. She loves how the grass is tall  and she can crawl on her tummy and pretend she’s in the jungle. The grasshoppers often play dead on a blade of grass and she can outstare any bug and make it jump away.

The blossoms sure looked pretty, she thought as she passed a fallen petal gently on her cheek; it felt like Mommy’s silk scarf.

 

http://www.emagazine.com/earth-talk/monarch-butterflies-in-sharp-decline

child seeks a challenge
caterpillar stares her way
on the milkweed

(c) Tournesol’16-05-06

Written for The Carrot Ranch in 99 words, no more, no less.

8 responses to “girl on a swing (haibun)”

  1. Charli Mills Avatar
    Charli Mills

    Such a beautiful journey to the other-world at our feet. And yes, as children we tend to see it more wonder than as adults.

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    1. Cheryl-Lynn Avatar
      Cheryl-Lynn

      Thanks so much! children tend to uncomplicate things.

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  2. Norah Avatar
    Norah

    Beautiful! I’m a sucker for anything butterfly! 🙂

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    1. Cheryl-Lynn Avatar
      Cheryl-Lynn

      Yeah, me too…thanks:)

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  3. Irene Waters 19 Writer Memoirist Avatar
    Irene Waters 19 Writer Memoirist

    Lovely. You’ve made me wish I was a child again and could crawl on my tummy through the grass.

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    1. Cheryl-Lynn Avatar
      Cheryl-Lynn

      Well there is nothing stopping us to do it and if anyone asks what we’re doing we could say, we’re looking for a contact lens. Wouldn’t that be hilarious having the neighbours all get on their tummies crawling 😉 Oh my, I really like that image!

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      1. Irene Waters 19 Writer Memoirist Avatar
        Irene Waters 19 Writer Memoirist

        I like that image too. 🙂

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      2. Cheryl-Lynn Avatar
        Cheryl-Lynn

        Let the blades of grass tickle your chin! 🙂

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