Her head is a bit foggy theses days with the heatwave this week. No matter how many hours of sleep, it still never seems to be enough. She thinks about her neighbours upstairs and wonders if they are finally resting after a month of fasting…Ramada is over, they too need to catch up on sleep.
(troiku)
heatwave
humid dense air
heavy breathing
heatwave
children squealing
splashing water
humid heavy air
piercing through
cicadas songs
heavy breathing
coolness of the night breeze
lovers play
© Tournesol’16-07-07
Daily Moments July 7 216 Heatwave Troibun
If you are interested in learning more on how to write a “troiku” check out Chèvrefeuille’s blog at Carpe Diem Haiku Kai, who created this new form of haiku.
I can feel the heat, humidity in your words.
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Thanks, it rained in the night so the humidity lifted just a little.
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Haibun and troiku are both great!
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Thanks so much, your haibun on alder truly inspired me…I am just missing time to write…tonight or tomorrow I will try to.
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heatwave is a real killer!
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It is so extreme since we only get hot weather 2 months in the year at best. Then for six months we complain about the cold and the ice/snow 😉
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